In high school it was always easier to be a surface level learner on a topic that you didn’t find very interesting. For me that topic was history because I didn’t find most of the things we talked about interesting. Instead of going deeper into learning about the topics I would just learn the facts in order to good on the quizzes and tests. “Strategic and surface learners display little interest in understanding anything” (Bain 45). I think this quote is true to how I was in history. I didn’t want to learn anything extra or understand the content, I just wanted the facts to study. I agree with what Bain’s idea of surface level learners because most of the information just went in and out of mind because all I cared about was the good score on the test.
I also feel the same way about history, I also never felt interested in history and decided to also be a surface learner. I feel as though your quote fit well with the points you had made. How you integrated the quote also benefited to your response that made sense to the reader.
I feel as though you should Frame your quote more and give some background to the original speaker after which you should try to give more points that the writer had given.