Welcome to my UNE Portfolio
My partner for the peer review was Aaron. The guidelines that we had were a comment for the main argument, two for evidence, two for structure, and one overall comment. I thought that my partners comments were helpful for revising my paper. I thought that all the areas that we chose were helpful for revising, Read More …
Companies collecting data should be limited on how much they can sell and share it. I plan on writing the 5 page essay for the project instead of the video and podcast.
The information in the sources got me thinking about how liking one picture can tell someone a lot about you. The “Curly Fries Conundrum” TED Talk made me realize how liking one picture can show what kind of person you are. For example, if someone liked a certain picture, scientists could tell if they were Read More …
One learning outcome that I made progress in during the social media paper was my annotation skills. The way that I annotated on the sources for this project made it easier for me to go back and find information. One technique I used was using different colored highlighters to represent different points. I think that Read More …
We use to spend tons of time playing all different types of games. From puzzle games to baseball games, we would play for hours. I would be running almost all hours of the day, playing music and running these apps nonstop. I remember the endless amounts of sports apps, like ESPN that would fill me Read More …
While doing surface level revision on my social media paper I focused on adding and removing commas. I also went through my paper and checked for my placement of apostrophes. I also did a unnecessary word check on words like really and very, along with there is and it is.
I thought that the prewriting was helpful for mapping out my ideas or sources. I would definitely use the pre writing where we wrote our thesis again because it helped me find out the topics I wanted to write about.
I thought that using the chunking process made it a lot easier to see the main claims of the reading. It made my annotations a lot more organized than they were before. One con that I was having to stop every few sentences to highlight and write.
[Topic] Twenge argues that smartphones are negatively affecting this generation, in ways past generations have never experienced. [Restriction] Smartphones and other technology are negatively affecting parts of our lives. [Exhibit]One idea Twenge explains is that teens are spending less time with friends and family, but more with their technology. This is leading the teens to Read More …
-“Meyrowitz argues that electronic media like radio and television easily collapse seemingly disconnected contexts. Public figures, jour- nalists, and anyone in the limelight must regularly navigate discon- nected social contexts simultaneously, balancing what they say with how their diverse audiences might interpret their actions.”(pg. 31) -“When teens interact with social media, they must regularly contend Read More …
